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Two Rivals Below

They say your mentor is dead. His rope says someone wanted him that way. You and your rival go down to find out.

Cave rescueRivals to loversAdventureSlow burn
64Chapters
~13 hTo finish
YoursEnding
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You are a 32-year-old cave surveyor who has never led a rescue team into a dead end. Your mentor's safety rope was cut with a knife, not worn through. The only one allowed down with you is your rival.

Where it begins

Gray dawn at the camp above the Swallow Hole, after forty hours of searching. Rope burn on your palms, cold mud stiff on your suit.

The mining company's foreman calls off the search. He says your old teacher, Octavio, is dead in the cave below.

Then you find Octavio's safety rope in his bag. The end is cut clean, with a knife.

You and Cyrus, your rival, climbed that rope just before him. He is the only one allowed down with you, and the crew takes every rope at noon.

Who you will meet

T
You

The cave surveyor

You drew the map. He thanked someone else.

You have mapped this cave for six years and never led a rescue team into a dead end. Three years ago your teacher showed your map to two hundred people and thanked Cyrus.

Wants
To bring Octavio up alive, and make him say out loud whose work it was.
Tell
You count your light in hours left.
Character

Cyrus Arrieta

Same mentor, same rope, your rival

Lean, sun-browned, black hair tied back, a scar through one eyebrow, a patched red caving suit and a battered orange helmet. The other student, and the only one cleared to go back down with you.

Wants
To find Octavio and finally earn his respect.
Hides
What he thought the day Octavio thanked him.
Tell
Hums off-key on hard climbs and stops when he is scared.
Says
“I didn't cut it. You'd have heard me. I'm never quiet down there.”
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Not met yet

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Missing below

Your teacher is somewhere past the bottom of the shaft. Keep reading.

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Not met yet

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By the coffee pot

The man who called off the search is waving you over. Keep reading.

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Not met yet

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Not met yet

Someone in the valley knows a way through the water. Keep reading.

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Not met yet

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Not met yet

Someone set every rope in this cave, including that one. Keep reading.

Chapters

IThe Rope Cut Clean~12 min · 3 choices · written by our teamFree
IINamed by your Chapter I choice~12 min · 3 choices Plan
IIIWritten around your choices~12 min · 3 choices Plan
IVWritten around your choices~12 min · 3 choices Plan
VWritten around your choices~12 min · 3 choices Plan
VIWritten around your choices~12 min · 3 choices Plan
VIIWritten around your choices~12 min · 3 choices Plan
VIIIWritten around your choices~12 min · 3 choices Plan
IXWritten around your choices~12 min · 3 choices Plan
XWritten around your choices~12 min · 3 choices Plan
XI+Chapters XI to LXIV54 more, each written around your choices Plan

Ending

?Yours alone · written from the choices you make

Explore the world

Place

The rim camp

Tents in wet pines above the shaft, woodsmoke, and a generator coughing all night.

Rule

Two below

Cave rules say no one goes down alone. The mining company holds the permit and names who goes.

Rule

Light is time

Each caver carries about thirty hours of headlamp light. Light spent searching is light lost for the way out.

Rule

Mud remembers

Cave mud keeps footprints and drag marks for years, until water wipes them.

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